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« on: September 10, 2010, 06:38:48 PM »
I have been messing around with sigs for 2-3 weeks now and would love some feedback.  I really enjoy doing this and would like to get a lot better.  Any help would be greatly appreciated.

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Re: Feedback
« Reply #1 on: September 10, 2010, 07:22:49 PM »
this is an interesting sig. You said you would like to get better so I will assume you will not take comments too harshly.

The sig's theme is obvious, but you have chosen to split it into three obvious areas. This has destroyed the flow overall. I would say look into the rule of thirds and use the player running as your primary focal point. See what you can do to create an environment and blend him into it a bit.
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Re: Feedback
« Reply #2 on: September 10, 2010, 07:27:47 PM »
i see there are a few good techniques here.  the composition is off some.  read some stuff in the "rule of thirds" for better placement of things. 

simple text is good but we know he plays for the rams because he's waring the uniform.  so you really just need his name.

this is a good start.  you could try:  moving the arch and steven to the right.  maybe move the arch to just before the tallest building and have steven overlap the arch a bit.  then cut off the left forth of the sig.  i think i'd try removing the logo as well and move the text up and to the right.

if you like the 400 width (i like that size) then make the sig taller and everything bigger and place the stuff as above.

one way to get better is to enter the SOTW.  i'm sure you'll do well.


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Re: Feedback
« Reply #3 on: September 10, 2010, 07:37:45 PM »
this is an interesting sig. You said you would like to get better so I will assume you will not take comments too harshly.

The sig's theme is obvious, but you have chosen to split it into three obvious areas. This has destroyed the flow overall. I would say look into the rule of thirds and use the player running as your primary focal point. See what you can do to create an environment and blend him into it a bit.

I felt something was not quite right with it, that it lacked flow and what you say makes sense.  I will read up on the rules of thirds, something I am completely unfamiliar with. Thank you for your help.

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Re: Feedback
« Reply #4 on: September 10, 2010, 07:40:00 PM »
i see there are a few good techniques here.  the composition is off some.  read some stuff in the "rule of thirds" for better placement of things. 

simple text is good but we know he plays for the rams because he's waring the uniform.  so you really just need his name.

this is a good start.  you could try:  moving the arch and steven to the right.  maybe move the arch to just before the tallest building and have steven overlap the arch a bit.  then cut off the left forth of the sig.  i think i'd try removing the logo as well and move the text up and to the right.

if you like the 400 width (i like that size) then make the sig taller and everything bigger and place the stuff as above.

one way to get better is to enter the SOTW.  i'm sure you'll do well.

Thank you for taking the time to look at this.  I will take your suggestions and keep working on this.  The reason for the 400x100 is that is the maximum size for sigs in the forum I post in.


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Re: Feedback
« Reply #5 on: September 11, 2010, 12:15:08 AM »
Excellent. For some good info on the rule of thirds, take a look at this and this.
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« Reply #6 on: September 12, 2010, 08:36:46 PM »
I have done a lot of reading on "thirds" and I think I somewhat understand it.  Can you guys please take a look at this and let me know if it is any better.  I realize the text is not great, I will work on that next.  I appreciate the help.

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Re: Feedback
« Reply #7 on: September 12, 2010, 09:10:09 PM »
Hi!  Glad to have another GIMPer :)

As a general "rule" you usually want to stick to one focal point.  Your most recent signature has 2.  It's confusing when your eye doesnt know where to focus.

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« Reply #8 on: September 13, 2010, 10:42:58 AM »
Hi!  Glad to have another GIMPer :)

As a general "rule" you usually want to stick to one focal point.  Your most recent signature has 2.  It's confusing when your eye doesnt know where to focus.

Would you mind expanding on that a bit more?  My intention was for the larger photo to be more of a background than a focal point.  Should I have blended that image in more?  Would that have lessoned the confusion or should it be a completely different background? 

I appreciate the feedback, I know I have a lot to learn.

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Re: Feedback
« Reply #9 on: September 13, 2010, 01:38:55 PM »
one way to achieve that would be to put the smaller image in front of and overlapping the large one, then lower the opacity on the larger one significantly.

Let me know if you would like an example.
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