Text can be very tricky. I think with a small tweak you could increase the depth on this piece and really push the focal to the render.
Let me know if you are interested in this idea.
Also, you will find that we do not do ratings here. I know this may seem odd, but allow me to explain a wee bit. Any rating system we would employ here, or on any other site, would not affect another nor would it be overly recognized in the graphics community as a whole. Each site that does ratings do so on a local level to their site. That said, we strive to improve the artist and the art, that way it really doesn't matter what someone else thinks your work is rated. I hope that makes some sense.
